by susangreenway
The way you have moved this story on from its original military based premise to include the commercial aspects of the Goose Cookers company is wonderful. You haven't lost any of the eroticism of the regular punishments for the military personnel, but now that civilians are becoming more involved, there is more scope for further chapters, I think. A charming, very erotic serial. 5 stars for this chapter, as well as my appreciation of your writing style.