by CharactersForClimax
Great comment. Constructive. Thanks for being a coward and doing it anonymously too. 👍🏻
Enjoyable read with a good storyline and well developed characters. Despite the open questions, it stands well on its own, but I guess there’s a part 2 out there and I’m looking forward to it. It’s not necessarily cowardly to comment anonymously, just lazy, but the anon is right - you need to get this edited. The numerous errors make reading difficult, and the fact that 90% would be picked up by Word or Google Docs makes it seem the author doesn’t care.