by redkathleen
This is a really good chapter - very well written, excellebt use of dialogue to build up the heat.
I love the realism that you give your stories with the italics at the beginning.
I can't wait for Chap 3.
I had a friend who spent time in Ibiza over a summer and had stories similar to yours. Yours is a very believable story when I compare it with my friend's exploits at the island. Don't change your English vocabulary to the American one. I appreciate the difference in the words between our two countries. I shall be looking forward to reading your next chapter.
background of why you write here it's not enjoable at all. you don't have one good friend in your life otherwise you would not do that.
And left the anonymous comment above. He didn't enjoy it, but I surely did! Can't wait to see what you're up to next.
To the writer, let it go, let him go, both emotionally and physically. These stories don't help in the long run.
There are some really small minded people in this world. I like your easy readable style. Am enjoying the stories. Keep it up.
Tom
incredibly well written for a 'first timer' - very sexy/horny story and well paced. Just ignore the anonymous bigots - just imagine them in their unwashed underwear playing with themselves before Mummy makes their breakfast.
You heal however you'd like. Go get what you want. You have a very healthy and normal sexual appetite. You like it dirty, but you also like it tender and loving. You simply want someone that can love you and lust for you. Those that can't both love and fuck a girl are the immature ones that can't "let go" and "get over" their childish inhibitions and preconceived notions of what their wife or girlfriend is supposed to be like. They can't handle a hot wife. Keep up the great stories and I hope your great sex continues with people that treat you well and give you what you need.
you feel you need to take revenge on your husband by telling the world all your lil fuck stories ...typical woman