All Comments on 'Kathy (White Trash Whore)'

by jon47m

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
the ending is too abrupt

There is a complete absence of closure! The way this is written, it comes off as a "part 1" kind of thing. It reeks of being abandoned.

Why write such a good story if you're not going to finish it? That's torture for your readers!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Great.

A new standard of filth. An epic story, so epic it took two masturbation sessions to finish it. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

it was hot except for the eating shit parts,,,

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