All Comments on 'Katie 03: Katie's All Achy'

I so much agree with your declaration about your work : not the less realistic in today's world, but acceptable for american hypocritical stances.

Thanks for sharing nice fantasms. (They have to remain just that !)

Some spelling or typing problems seem already improving ? (Or I'm paying less attention ?)

Belgian chick.

Rea?I stick despite all the conveniences of being a pupil at daddy's school.

Some years back I read another reader's suggestion for Proof Reading: read your work while recording yourself. During playback, read along while listening to your recording. The grammatical, spelling, punctuation and/or verb tense errors will be more easily identified.

Your story is very easily believable, and relatable.

Nicely done.

These are so hot. Makes me all hot and bothered in my princess parts.