All Comments on 'Katie Moves In Ch. 05'

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Frankie1952Frankie1952over 2 years ago

I love these two together. Their romance feels just right. I think they should fine a state that allows cousins to marry and go get married there. Australia allows cousins marriage why is the US so uptight about it?

Nmb11Nmb11over 2 years ago

This is a great story, and gets better with each chapter. As the other comment mentioned there are several states including New Jersey (yup) where first cousins can marry. There’s lots of ways this story can go on with a great circumstance

ScottishTexanScottishTexanover 2 years ago

I really wish that you had put the first four chapters down as a single combined submission and had this one as the opening scene of Chapter 2. I probably would have given you a 5/5.

Please try to write longer chapters with greater details. You're finally starting to reach your stride.

Rapier875Rapier875about 2 years ago

I do hope you're going to finish this, but not leave a 12 year gap like before ?

Rapier

unclemerv77unclemerv7711 months ago

it's been two years, I hope that there is still a chance for a continuation

Frankie1952Frankie19523 months ago

So realistic. wonderful story. More please. why don't they get married? Many places permit cousins to marry and having babies is not a much greater risk than unrelated couples.

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