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Anonymousover 3 years agoRushed
Too rushed. She just starts to learn how to suck his cock and now he is pushing a finger in her ass while they are 69'ing? It would have been more romantic to let her lick his cock and play with it a bit. Then he can suck her pussy and play with her a little more. THen they can 69 together. Then he takes her both ass and pussy but really after a little more play time. It seems way too rushed. Liked the first chapter but don't get to home plate without some romance along the way.
Klitomaticover 3 years agoOnly a two
Slow the hell down, you have good ideas and your writing isn't bad, but to paraphrase a woman, not so fast, I need to finish too.
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