by bilbo181
That was one of the best stories I have ever read and I have read many.
Thanks for a great effort.
as far as it went,,,was hoping for more,,,after all, friends were going to stay adjacent to their room,,hhhmmm, maybe they would get to expeience the newly oiled katie!! ((lol)) after all, it was a long wait 'til her first orgasm and his one and only,,,
more to come i hope!
This is probably my favorite story I've read on LIterotica and I've read thousands. I've also written a few myself. Bravo!! Great story and writing. Definately 5 stars and my favorite story!
The story was erotic. Those people going mad at the basic scenario, just don't read this kind of story, it's not difficult to work out.
To the author: your story is slightly spoiled by some very basic English errors. Please get a proof reader if you write more stories. It's not particularly well written, but to be fair you essentially put a disclaimer to that effect at the start.
One thing to note: French Champagne is a meaningless phrase. Champagne only comes from the Champagne region of France, so French Champagne is, at best, a tautology.
i am a massage therapist myself but would love to be taken over with an erotic massage. i thoought that was vry well writen x
got your name from RC, massage thread.sound like you had a lot of fun. thanks for wrighting about it. other storie good also. BC
my wife and I love this story. We've re-read this story a few times. We have a hard time getting through it; sorta get distracted. Anyone know of any other story at the level?
What a great story but would have wished him to cum inside her.
Can you upload somewhere your recording of the massage
Very erotic. I thought she was going to squirt at some point. Nice story
If this is a true story this writer does not love his wife. A split seems just around the corner.
I really enjoyed this story, one of the sexiest I have read. I would love to book the same service for my wife. Well done author!
I can't believe I'm saying this in a public forum but I almost came - from merely _reading_ a story; (a nicely long story) - without any other stimulation, mental or otherwise...still on another planet and lost my brain pages ago - the delicious description of her massuer didn't hurt, oh my god.
I'm amazed at how relatable her behavior is - I guess you meant it when you said this was based on truth! And, um,..*lol*...I've made soo many typos just trying to comment because I'm too turned on to spell (and feel faint myself..eek. Your tale is wayyy too erotic...) In other words, wow, way to go, awesome work if a little "torturous" to read...amazed!!! :)
Seriously, your little rhapsody did stuff to me that a guy should have to date me first to evoke in me!! *l*
You are one talented story-teller and have a very lucky wife to say the least. Phew!
True or not, this was a fine entertaining story. I liked all three players and the scenario, and thought the writing didn't get in the way. Thanks. Do some more.
I want that massage desperately. True story - I am green with envy. Thanks for a great read.
What a simply ace story. Just wish my massaging techniques were half as good!
One of the worst.They say "stupidity knows no bounds"!! They were right.
A good tale and well told. I can't wait to read the follow up, if there is one.
can't understand the big deal, a slut got fucked by a black cock and watched by a wimp!!
i see a few comments demeaning your work, i guess they are jealous and feel hurt because of the interracial nature, but i think people who have small dicks, feel threatened by black man, & are immature,women are attracted to a man's personality,presence, & not with race & as far as size of cock goes it varies in all races limiting to human capability,and men are attracted to a women's appearance,sensuality.
by the way am brown, am 6'4, well built and have a thick 8 & half penis, but for men several other factors come into play,not just appearance,so grow up racists!!
good work one of the best massage stories i read, keep up the good work
long time lurker, first comment i've ever left for a story...just had to! amazing build-up, incredible finish, top-rate story that never fails to arouse and titillate...kudos to the author, well-written erotic story that i consider a classic!!!
I have read thousands of stories and can tell for sure it's one of the best I've read.
Sorry to read the negative comments, those people are unsecure and haven't felt the magic of sensing a womans satisfaction with the idea of ending up in such an awesome adventure and so fullfilled. I will certainly work on making this happen for my wife of 19 years, maybe on our 20th. Anniversary.
Thank you
Certainly one of the best I have ever read, very well written - a refreshing change.
I hope there is another chapter or a different story.
... who stated that this story was 'mindless drivel' and had no writing skills, how would he/she know? They obviouisly have never heard the word Sensual, or, know what it means. Many stories in here and other sites are, indeed, written with no or very little writing skills, spelling in particular - they are just slam-bang, thank you ma'am mindless drivel. This one was written with great skill, knowledge and passion. Keep up the good work.
I couldn't stop reading as the tension was building. Very well written, keeping me on the "edge of my seat". I had a similar experience and I can tell you, it was one of the most erotic ever, unexpected, somewhat dangerous and exciting.....
that was wonderful! thank you, my pussy is now dripping wet...
Nothing could be more erotic than this account, seeing Katie build up to such indescribable joy. Thank you so much for taking me along with them. More !!!
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Wow, thanks so much for sharing! I am having the "hardest" time taking the time to write this comment before "taking things in hand" while I contemplate what's going to happen as you return to the hotel room to further pleasure your wife! My fantasies tend to be all in the Femdom male submissive area and this story is such a creative expression of that! Please write more...and it would be wonderful to hear Katie's version of the experience!
The way you lead us through the whole situation and then the slow build up to Katie's enjoyment was exceptionally well done. There were a couple of minor errors, which perhaps could have been corrected with spell check, but they certainly did not detract from the powerful way the story arrived at the climax.
I thoroughly enjoyed it!
the last to comment are from two true cuckolds, I'll be you're raising your wife's lovers kids are you. Fucking Fags
To all the readers who are knocking the writer because they wrote a story involving a man letting his wife have sex with another man and watching....... I am curious as to why you read it if you arent into that kind of genre. Common sense would tell me that if I am not interested in this sort of story maybe I shouldn't waste my time reading it. However you few that did decide to talk down to the writer are too ignorant to know the meaning of the word cuckhold, are too stupid to stop reading or are deep down jealous of the fact that you are not able to write anything that the readers of literotica would find entertaining.
To the person saying Bilbo needs a proof reader..... Honestly I did not realize that you have to be an English major to be allowed to write an idea or fantasy you feel strongly enough about that you want to share it with others.
Finally to Bilbo..... You will never be able to please everyone. Please don't let it discourage you from sharing your stories with those of us who don't care if you misspelled a couple of words, put the wrong punctuation or whatever else the anonymous perfect writer found wrong with it. You had a thought, you expressed it, it was easily understood and well liked by the majority. Good luck with future endeavours.
Best wishes
I wish my husband would arrange a surprise like this one. I had a massage while on holidays ... Did not go as far as sex but the rest sounded familiar... Best massage I ever had ... Is it too far to go just for a massageifyou have to drive 7 hours to get there...
This was one of the best I've ever read!! Don't listen to those who don't agree, you are a lucky man!!!! Thank you for sharing it! :)
Editor? Anyone who objects to a few misspellings (at least one later spelled correctly) would probably give Lincoln a 'C' for his Gettysburg Address because of awkward phraseology and not meeting word-length expectations! This was very good re: writing mechanics, and did an excellent job of mixing narrative from Hubby with dialogue from Sweetie and Bull! The story was as much of a prolonged tease to readers as the Bull's massage was to Sweetie!
I especially liked the way the author left open the option for a Ch.2 in a tale that had arrived at a reasonable conclusion!
5.49 stars! (favorite)
a friend of mine timothym thinks this story is bad ....but if you want to see really fucking bad you should read his stories.? there fucking shiter than this plop.?
I couldn't stop reading. I felt as though I was there with you enjoying the secret as your wife had her sensual massage. If this is truely, a true story your wife is a special woman and you a special man to give her the fantasy she wanted. Now, can I buy a copy of the tapes. LOL ;)
This must be the third or fourth time I have read this story. It still reads just as great as the first time. At the beginning of the story, you indicated that there was more to come. I eagerly await the next chapter.
Well-written. I could visualize (and feel!) every act and reaction. This is how I measure the worth of a story, not to mention my desire to re-read. Thank you!
I read your story in total awe, and told my wife about it - she *loved* it too!!! Now I'm thinking 'how do I find Joel'? It would be a fantastic present for her (and a first for both of us)
I read your story with a hard on from page 2 mmmmmm My wife loves it she says we need to find a Joel too!! More please!
This mad me so wet. I could almost feel Joel with me. Very well written, looking forward to more.
I just noticed you've returned to our ranks. Do hope you finally get around to posting the promised follow-up chapter to this story.
What a sensual story. Couldn't keep my hand off my cock as I thought of the masseur's hands rubbing her body.
tell us up front it is a cuck story with a slut who pretends to be a wife.
If his wife drank an entire bottle of champagne in less than an hour, except for the one glass her husband drank, how could she possibly give consent to be touched by a complete stranger to her -- the sex worker hired by her husband?
Her consent is completely missing from this creepy tale.
Well done! My wife would like to arrange a meeting with Joel...
I'm one of the women who never seem to orgasm and from reading this and other massage stories I wonder if a sensual massage would help me. Sensual massages or erotic massages are illegal so it can't happen for real. Probably cost more than in this story. Course most of the time these stories revolve around young, slim, beautiful women, not average older women. Older average women don't count and yet we are just as interested in having orgasms as the young, slim beautiful women are. It is kind of unfair. Don't you think?
@ Anon This Hungarian joke came to my mind.
The young 21 years old prince was walking in the forest, when he met a very very old lady.
This very very old lady was telling the prince, that she is a very beautiful young 19 years old girl, only an evil sorcerer had changed her to a very very old lady, She was telling the young prince.
"If you do love/sex with me three times I can become young beautiful 19 years old girl."
The prince agreed and he did sex with the very very old lady three times.
The prince waited the rffect, if the very very old lady would became very beautiful 19 years old girl. However the very very old lady remained a very very old lady.
The young 21 years old prince became mad at the very very old lady and the prince shouted at the very very old lady.
"You lied to me, because you remained very very old!"
The very very old lady looked at the young prince with saecastic way and answered.
"How old are you?"
The prince answered proudly.
"I am 21 years old."
The very very old lady told the prince.
"Are you 21 yers old and you beleive in the fairy tales????!!!!!!"
why would anyone want to be married to a fucking low life cheating cunt like her? not an man I every knew.
I got carried away . I not played myself for years .i think I may cum as much as Katie .im going to book myself a escort now .i may be 64 but I want. Feel a cock in me .love Samantha Jayne xxx
I started to read this story and realized that I had read it in the past. However, I am partial to "first-time" and "massage" stories (see mine here on Literotica.com) and read it anyway -- enjoying it thoroughly all over again!
I played with myself and orgasmed 5 times while reading this. Maybe one more time before I sleep..
This story had me erect. Great story ... dragging on the message part really got me going. I could visualize the whole thing. Got me thinking how I could do that to my wife. Thanks.
Really, people actually think watching wife have sex with another guy while hiding and jacking off is hot? And next time is a gang bang, oh wow, neat. Does hubbie get his little dick sucked or any strange or is he just happy having a slut wife. Again, I just don't get this at all.
It is still a willing cuckolding and I don't like that. A one-time massage is not the same as letting your wife/GF fuck around with first one and then another. Still, neither would be my choice, for sure.
wish it was my wife the next step would be for me to massage his cock
My wife and I have fantasized about this type of scenario, although she isn't into Black men at all. Very hot story!
Yes a Good Time Had by All, so to speak. I would be interested to see if Katie would be honest with her Husband about what all happened and how it really made Her feel? I also wonder if this experience would help make the Husbands Love Making any more Pleasurable for his wife? The recorded tapes are a good training tool if nothing else, it sure gave me some good ideas to try. I Love to prolong a woman's orgasm to make it more intense and multiple are even better
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SAME OLD WIMP HUSBAND, WHORE WIFE STORY. SINCE I LIKE STORIES ABOUT REAL PEOPLE THIS IS NOT MY CUP OF TEA.
what happened next??? anniversary weekend. did she fuck the husbands brains out?? become more aggressive???
please let us know
Am I weird for wishing I could set up an erotic massage like this for my husband with a gorgeous, well-endowed female masseuse? God, that idea makes me wet!
This was a FANTASTIC story!!! I loved the slow build up and couldn't stop touching myself while I read it. I enjoy a therapeutic massage from time to time but have been considering treating myself to a sensual one for quite sometime!!! THIS clinches it!!! I'm going to look for a masseuse like Joel tomorrow!!! Who knows, maybe I'll submit the story of MY EXPERIENCE with it as well!!!
#1. you are an excellent writer.
#2 if indeed this is a true story, masseuses around the world owe you ~
#3 regardless, it was hot !!
#4 if my early eighties wife would be even slightly amenable to this,,,I would buy it for
her beautiful old pussy since my lust old impotent cock has given up sadly !
#5 THANKS for the memories my friend !
This is one of my favourite stories! I have read it more times than I can remember over the years, and I only read the best. I wish you would write more!
I've often fantasized about receiving just such an erotic massage...and as a guy, it would be wonderful to explore some of my bi-curious fantasies by having a male masseur engage me as Joel did Katie...
It was very exciting becoming aroused as I read along and imagined myself in Katie's place...I thought, "how incredible would that be?"
I am a qualified masseur and have done this many times. I have given pleasure to many women, both single and married without guilt on either side. Men have also had orgasms from my massages even though I am hetro. In my eyes we are all entitled to pleasure. My pleasure is from giving others pleasure and if they can't walk for a long time after one of my massages I know that I have done a good job. Cheers on a good story.
Thoroughly enjoyed this story. The build up was great, very sexy. Quite a fantasy to think of a massage like this.
Nice present for your wife! I do wonder how your meeting back in the room went!
Well, i'm a masseur myself, and i did recognize a lot of moves. And for all the people reading this, it's true that by making the limits drops, you do feel fully relax after a session like this. A good massage therapist will always respect the limits of his customer. You always wait for sign before crossing the line of therapeutic to sensual massage.
I greatly enjoy reading this, it was done with class !!!
keep up writing, you have a good way of telling a story. And if you cruise around Montreal, for all you folks out there, i'm always available for a massage !!! ;-)
that is why I took massage classes.
We always start with the understanding that I am happy to give her a "no strings attached" massage, but am always willing and able to let her receive as much or as little beyond that as she and her arousal desires. I get the opportunity to give her a relaxing and therapeutic massage taking joy in making her feel better. And yes, the time shared, with touching, warm oils, and music can and often will lead to more, much more. Some times she becomes so relaxed that she is able to drift gently into a deep sleep. Other times she becomes energized and stimulated leading to a wonderful experience. Either way, she gets the benefit of a tension relieving massage, I derive pleasure knowing I have given her what she needs to remove the stress of the day.
We have no interest in bringing others into our private space. She is not interested in being stimulated by another person. I am very content as a her exclusive masseur. For both of us it is a win win situation.
My name is Sandy and I'm 39. It's Saturday night and I'm home alone (again). I'm bored and lonely. I've been married 14 years to a good man who works hard and loves me very much. I have told him many times that I would prefer for him to spend less time working (and more time with me) but he insists. He's a lawyer and he is very set on becoming a partner. Billable hours are quite important.
I'm a professional myself and we make a lot of money. We have a very nice home and I often wonder if we own it or it owns us.
My friends tell me that I still look quite attractive but I feel old. I don't get out very often. I find myself watching reality tv far too often. Is this my life?
And yes, I find myself reading stories like this. And I find myself imagining that I'm in the story. I find myself reading this stuff every day. I'm not into porn (I guess men are more visual and for women it's in our heads).
The really scary part is the type of story that gets to me. I find that I like the stories about slutty women. I get some kind of perverse thrill as I imagine myself submitting to a stranger. I imagine what it would feel like to call for a taxi and go out in lingerie. How would the taxi driver react if I asked came out in a short robe and asked him to help me with my luggage. What would he do when we got to my room? What would he do when I pressed against him. Would he fuck me hard? Would he take pictures of me and tell me what to do? Would he use those pictures to blackmail me? Would he own my ass? What would he make me do? Oh, God, what would you make me do?
What if you write to me? What if I like what you write? What if we exchange pictures. What if I give you my address and you show up at my home and I'm alone. I would let you in. I think things would happen very quickly. You know that I want to submit to you. Would you tell me to suck your cock? Would you call me a dirty cheating slut? I hope you would. Would you tell your slut to crawl to you? You know I would.
My name is Sandy and I want to be your little bitch. I don't even know your name. I have no idea who might be reading this. You might be tall and skinny or old and fat. I don't really care. That's the thrilling part. I want to give myself to a stranger. I want to lose all control. I'm prim and proper all the time (except right now as I rub my pussy). My pussy is soaking wet as I think of you, my new master. Whomever you are, you could control me. Are you married yourself? Are you lonely? I will be your slut. All I ask is that you don't hurt me and that you don't ruin my life. Other than that I will do anything that you ask of me. I will be your little slut. I will be your whore. Does that make me a bad person? At this point I don't really care. I feel like I'm on a runaway train and I just want to let go and see what happens. I want to fuck you and suck your cock and be your dirty little whore. I want to be your slut.
xoxoxoxo Sandy xoxoxoxoxoxo
Well i really enjoyed this story and even better that it was true,i would love to get a massage like that for my wife but i would like to stay in the room and watch
Fantastic reading as well as the comments of others. I would think Katie would really put out for her husband after the marvelous massage she had just received .
Let's hope there will be more adventures like this!
What an erotic story. I could picture every moment and it was almost impossible not to cum half-way through. I imagined my own wife being massaged by Joel and perhaps a friend of his and then I had to explode!!
Thanks.
Fantastic story really didn't know what she was going to do until he actually tucked het. Expect the husband will have had a fantastic night when he returned. Need to read the next part so get down to finishing the story.
Great story would love the same to happen to my wife but when he cums it should be in her cunt so I can lick it all up then lick his cock clean and make him cum in my mouth.O
I go to a masseur who does most of the same moves to me. Wish my GF would join us! Please continue the story.
Some writers on this here site are real sickos. This is one of them.
Therefore - 1* !!
Highly detailed and imaginative story, but where is the confrontation between husband and Katie? That lack ruins the tale!
this story is the best, and told in such detail that it must be real. I will try this on my wife..
Great story, loved it. I'm beginning to think all negative comments by the anons are out of pure jealousy. Shame, this great stories ratings should not be tarnished by anons who obviously don't share the writer's fantasies or desires.
Really got me going, I do wish he'd filled her belly with cum! I hope there is a next chapter soon.
As far as the anonymous whiners, if you don't like it don't read it.
Fabulous imagery! Really able to picture the whole thing. Very sexy. Great job!