All Comments on 'Katie's Massage'

write more like these!

Truly outstanding. What a present. What a wonderful husband.

Perfect! I wish you finished with the husband confronting her with what she did and the response!

The build up in this story was truly incredible. God.

i would love love love a gift like this:-)purrrrfect

Great story! Great read! The author made the sexual tension build slowly which really paid off near the end! I wish more erotica was written this way! Great work!!

would love to read more like this mabey the next one joel and his friends could all do her at the same time a fantasy of mine for my wife

Can't wait for the folow up to this story -- It was great!

I have had a full body massage that was sexual.

You brought back sooooooo many memories for me. I am ready to go again!! Your descriptive writing had me coming few times during the story.

I look forward to reading your stories........thanks

It was perfect. I agree with the other guy that you should have finished the story with you and the wife confronting her after the massage I believe you can still do it. But it is a great story. And WHERE IS THE FOLLOW UP THAT YOU MENTIONED IN THE STORY. Thanks..

Oh My Goodness! I think I've soaked the computer chair through! I really liked how you kept the story building up; one of the best teases I have ever read! Thanks for the sleepless night!

I'm sure the author won't mind that I skipped from page one to the public comments assuming this was another of the usual masseur ends up fucking the wife while husband watches and masturbates. Don't any naormal males write on Literotica. The number of stories that have the wife being fucked by friend, employee or whatever while the husband gets off by watching are amazing. Why did these guys bother getting married? They can get a porno film a lot cheaper than a wife. the disgusted Ct. Yankee

that was cool . wow i wud luv a massage like that. hope my hubby is listening

That is one of the Hottest stories I've read for a while. Keep them cummin'~~~~~

Incredible, simply incredible! Fantastic buildup!

One of the best stories on this site. Your writing and the way you slowly expose Kate is so hot.

Would love to see you write more like this.

thank you for a really hot well written story.

Definitely one of the very best stories on this site!!! The only suggestion I have is to spend a little more time on the actual sex act itself. The story was built up really well, but I just felt like the climax was a little rushed and it wasn't described as well as the massage itself was. The ending was alright but a little more elaboration wouldn't hurt either.

I know I'm being really picky, but it's only because you show so much potential, and your story is excellent!!! Seriously...it rivals the sex scenes of 'professional' romance novels.

I've been reading here for several years and that is the hottest story I'ver read. Especially being true. I wonder how mad my wife would be if I did that, or will she love me more? Anyway, wished you'd have told how things went after they got home, and does she know he did this. If you have more, baller72001us@yahoo

great... i loved it soo much i read it .. then read it again just to enjoy myself a second time. would have liked to see the wifes face if hubby was standing in the doorway and things concluded. wow..

IN REGARDS TO ALL STORIES WHERE THE HUSBAND GETS OFF WHATCHING HIS WIFE FUCKED BY ANOTHER MAN. I'm sure the author won't mind that I skipped from page one to the public comments assuming this was another of the usual masseur ends up fucking the wife while husband watches and masturbates. Don't any naormal males write on Literotica. The number of stories that have the wife being fucked by friend, employee or whatever while the husband gets off by watching are amazing. Why did these guys bother getting married? They can get a porno film a lot cheaper than a wife. DISGUSTED

I love the process of seduction and this story was absolutely perfect. I couldnt imagine a much better story :)

A male who needs to get off by watching another man fuck his wife is less than a man and doesn't deserve a woman. And a woman who allows this to happen is a whore with no self esteem or personal worth.

The Baron

OMG , That was such a hot story, where do I book my massage ?

I truly thought that was one of the best stories I have read here.

Thankyou.xoxoxoxoxoxoxEmma.

I have bookmarked this story as one of the best ever at this site. Just came back and read it again after a long while. As good as the first time

WOW, WOW, WOW, WOW, WOW !!! - what a great story !!! - It took me a week to read your wonderful story as I kneaded to stop and rest at various times to catch my breath and regain my strength (if you know what I mean !!!)- I am a massage therapist and wish I could go to a school of sensual/erotic massage and learn a few of the techniques described in your story - keep up the good work and let me know if your wife wants to help an amateur turn professional!

The only thing better than watching your wife get a THOROUGH massage is masturbating while watching and then sliding your penis into her spermy (and hopefully fertile) cunthole and enjoying her for yourself. IT is truly fantastic!!

Still waiting for more from you ....great writing and i have cum many times to this story. I have this same fantasy to do this with my wife

This is one of the best massage stories, and you have done an excellent writing job among other things, do write more such stories.

probably the best story i have read here! makes me want to do the same with my wife.

thanks for the story you wrote! it truely is one of the best here.

Believe it or not, I'm 78 YO and got it off twice. Wow, what a story!!!!!!!

I love massage stories and this is one of the better ones I've read. I can't believe you were able to make it five pages long and still be so good, that's impressive. I'm not big on the husband sharing the wife, but that didn't keep me from enjoying an incredibly well written piece.

I loved this story. It coincides nicely with my own fantasies for my wife. I plan on reading it again, with her, in bed one night soon. I'm sure if she reads it, I'll be in for a great night of hot sex! Thanks Bilbo

Wow...what a page turner! Hot and steamy....I could feel the heat and smell the oil.

Great job!

Jane

I am completely envious of your wife... My husband would undoubtedly never set up anything like that for me. I thoroughly enjoyed the story, thank you so much! I came twice just reading it!!! Thank you!!!

Quite possibly the hottest story I've read on Literotica. The way it was told -- and the patience in getting to the heart of it. I felt like I was getting the same teasing!

I also liked all the teasing talk about her ass -- making us think that "one last thing" would be popping her anal cherry with him -- and yet you held that back. Great stuff.

Made me wet.

This is really erotic enough,and also very real to me...

My favorite, the only literotica story I reread over and over again. I only wish I could do this for my wife -- and watch while she gets done so slowly and so sensually.

Best story on this or any other site. Theres a missive reason for that you take time to set the scene and her inhibitions slowly fade away as she is caught in lust! Pure classic!!

I have been secretly reading many stories without my boyfriend's permission. He would die if he knew I was getting off on these stories as I dream of other men and women and we don't even have SEX yet!

This is the hottest story I have read and I have been reading and looking at pictures now for many months.

VERY HOT

WOW - very arousing story. Phantastic work! Keep it up! I am dying to read your next story - thanks!!!

I think I have orgasmed more more while reading this one story than all the other stories on Lit I have read put together. Thank you , thank you, thank you....cant wait to read more..

you write very well. You don'r rush the story. You teased us the way Joel teased Katie. I cant wait to read your next story. I hope it is more about Katie.

It was very erotic Well done

Jim

Really enjoyed this story! Thanks for writing it!

I don't usually flame stories, but I don't see anything positive about this one. Wimp Hubby pays Super Stud $200 to give his wife more orgasms and better sex than he can... as an anniversary present no less... sounds like a plan to me... NOT. Unless, of course, he really wants out of the relationship because he has somebody else and he's setting slut wife up to ditch. Maybe that's chapter 2 - he pimps her out in a crack house and takes off with somebody else.

Even better ... if it "came" from him in person ... so to speak. Very fine writing and sexy as hell. Well done!

one of the signs of a truely gripping erotic story is the author's ability to hold the reader at the edge by slooowwwwly building up to the final countdown. bilbo181 has definitely captured this effect and has written one of the very BEST stories ever, here in Literotica. please try to find the time to write another!

"Sorry, I don't get this one 12/07/06 by gatorhermit in usa

I don't usually flame stories, but I don't see anything positive about this one. Wimp Hubby pays Super Stud $200 to give his wife more orgasms and better sex than he can... as an anniversary present no less... sounds like a plan to me... NOT. Unless, of course, he really wants out of the relationship because he has somebody else and he's setting slut wife up to ditch. Maybe that's chapter 2 - he pimps her out in a crack house and takes off with somebody else." . . . (this was quoted from gatorhermit below)

What would cause gatorhermit to lurk around these cheating wife stories and read them??? Must be coming from a lot of pain to punish himself this way... His comments do pave the way for an interesting turnaround for another story. It would be totally a good plot for the cheating husband to set up his totally proper wife for a big fall with the scenario that gatorhermit sets up. irchristo@yahoo.com

This was an excellent story, well written and planned. My only disappointment is that I checked to see what other stories you had written and saw that you hadn't submitted since 2004. You have the talent, you should use it! Once again, thank you for the excitement and the buildup to truly sensual pleasure.

Was it really a true story, or was that part of the buildup?

The detail and the suspense (not the right word, but you know what I mean" intense. Hot.

Curious why you'd do something like that on anniversery though, surely thats a day not to do this.

My wife loved the story because it brought back memories of when she had a similar massage. The only differences were that the guy was white and he did cum in her pussy. I didn't see it but later when she got home she told me all the details. At first I thought she was exaggerating, especially about the part of having sex with him becuase she is normally very shy and reserved during our 28 ywars of marriage. However, I was convinced when I slide my hand down into her panties because they were all wet and sticky. Her pussy hair was wet and sticky as well. There was no mistaking it, it was cum. For some reason I found it arousing to know that another man had screwed my wife.

As you built the story, you heightened my desire. You made me cum at least 3 times. Please write some more. Loved it

The build up is what I really enjoy. It didn't race to the 'finish'.

I enjoyed this months ago and stumbled on it again by chance and stuck with it anyway -- and still enjoyed it all over again. I used to fantasize about a masseur doing my wife while I watched. We had a blind masseur years ago so he couldn't see just how much I was enjoying his working on her naked bod. I'd like to read about the "special" massage when Joel brings his friends along!

Dam I have justnow read your stories.I hope you are around and are in the writitng mood.I jacked off long and slow on the storie but,must admit I was cumming long before storie was over.Write More.

I have this story bookmarked and come back every year or so. For me it is definitely one of the 10 best on Literotica. Perhaps because I have always had this fantasy too...

Woderfull, very erotic and beautifull story

My boyfriend and I just read this in bed together, mimicking each move of joel and katie....needless to say, i had the hardest best orgasm of my life...not to mention my boyfriend!

This story is incredibly good. The writing is amazing, and the fact that it's based on a true story takes my breath away. I've read your story quite a number of times and it never gets old. Well done.

WOW - true story or not, this is one of the finest written stories I have read. Great detail and plot flow: from initial setup to the final word. I wish I were this good at conveying a story. Keep writing!

Wow, super hot. When can we expect the sequel you hinted at in the intro? Can't wait!

BRAVO!

very nicely expressed a woman's mind for fun and fuck with healthy base. congrats

that was amazing! where can i get some of that?

A little long but the suspense created was majic. The whole massage just biulds to an amazing climax which was really worth waiting for. My climax was joined by both parties in the story.

I would love to read more like this.

The story you wrote is excellent! So real and so acceptable.

We've been waiting a long time for the sequel, Bilbo. Please don't disappoint us. Nice, slow buildup! Gary13

WOW WHAT A FANTASTIC STORY. KATIE,S MASSAGE.

SUCH AN EROTIC STORY EXCELLENT WRITING EXCITING STORY.

I'm tempted to get my partner to read see if he gets the hint. Very very well written.

Dude if i were you i would just left her in the hotel and gone home because after that sh!t i would have lost my friddgen mind

I loved it! I can't wait to give my wife a massage like that! Keep writting!

I think some people are missing the point of this entire web site. They're hot stories, not social or relationship manifestoes or How-Tos. I mean, there's an entire section of this site devoted to rape and incest stories, but people come here to whine about a wife getting a sensual massage?? Hookay. It was hot for me. I love it.

Dude, you let your wife scotty´s free?You let her play and you don´t(You only like to watch?)?Hey, can i bang her, please?

I am envious! I shall certainly keep this in mind for my own future use. Being a voyeur, I'm not certain whom I envy more, you, or your wife.

Why would a man want his wife to cheat on him?

Glad we got some more background information today about you guys, we loved seeing your contributions today of course, they really do belong on that thread! If you're still thinking of writing more stories for this site, please let us know when you upload it, we're great fans of your work so far!

Cheers,

Sin & Jur

I finally read this story all the way through. I only ever got to page 2 before....well...ummm...well before i got really excited...if you catch my drift...today i got to the fifth page (due to a phone call half way through). Not disappointed at all. Sure wish I was Katie.

that is really hot. very drawn out and delicious!

"I was beginning to understand why white women all seem to have black man fantasies." You have got to be kidding!!! Why would we "all" want to be crack whores and raise your bastard children by ourseves. The average blackman has so much to offer us poverty, AIDS or a host of other STD's, a chance to someday be his # 1 HO ect.The quote should be "Almost all white queers seem to have black man fantasies." OR "Almost all blackmen seem to have white women fantasies." Which one are you bilbo 181 a blackman or gay? To write a story like this you must be one or the other or both. Either way you are'nt a woman and you certainly do not speak for "all" of us!

The story is somewhat drawn out, but erotic nonetheless. I am a retired professioanl masseur and have given my share of sensuous and erotic massages to a small percentage women, and still do sometimes for free. Most, as in this story, were conservative to moderate, and with gentle coaxing and really talented hands and fingers, were led a massage that they had secretly wanted, complete with their cumming loudly and proudly.

Everyone won't want this service, but a woman shouldn't feel guilty about wanting this kind of service, or seeking it out. Men don't.

I have to be out of town this weekend and am taking my wife. Unfortunately it is not a super large town but I did find a male who does out calls. I told him I was giving my wife a gift of a massage and wanted her limp, breathless and satisfied. When we arrive I will give her a gift box.

In it will be a bottle of wine, an envelope for the massour with his payment and tip and note telling him again I want her limp, breathless and satisfied and that he can share the note with her. Then there will be another envelope for her with extra cash in case the massage developes more.

You were the inspiration. Realistically her experience is unlikely to follow your story but.......I hope she has fun. Unfortunately no cameras but maybe she will tell what happens. Thanks for a great story.

Gawd I LOVED it! I was so arroused by that story that I was so damn wet and my husband and I had sex on the back patio! Not shameful (after reading that little exert, there'd be no cause for shame in this respect)! While I would NEVER consider having sexual relations with another man while together with my husband, that is a very erotic story and one I sure wouldn't mind having (the massage that is). Mmmmmm, that was spectacular-more so than what I used to read in Play Girl Mags! All thumbs up, getting juiced just thinking about another round with hubby~

incredibly erotic tale - I've always wanted to watch a woman receive a sensual massage by a another woman - this was even better

I am trying my hand at writing and I must say your story really does a great job. I was really impressed at the way you add all the right details to make the story come to life. Truly awesome indeed.

I WANT ONE !!!!

This is one of my favorite stories on Lit, The massage fantasy has always been a favorite of mine and this is the best written ever. Thanks!

Thank you so much, I dream of my wife doing this. well written.

That was one of the most erotic and sensual stories I have read - I would love to experience that for real. Keep up the very good work

Wow! I sure hope that this was a true story. If so, does Joel teach? Or would you sell the video as a how to? Keep writing!!!!! Your descriptions made me feel like Joel was massaging me, and I'm a straight male.

would love to see my wife enjoying a similar experience while i watched from another room

This story is really great and very very well written.Love the sensuality and give the author my compliments.Amazing writing skills.

Still I am a bit curious what happened next.

Will definitely recommend it to my friends.

Awsome and very well written. Loved it!!!!!!

I loved this story! Loved the way he used his fingers! Wish I were Katie...I am so wet right now, can't stop touching myself, even as I read the comments...I only wish I had a man right now...

I felt like I was in the room . I became totally enthralled with the story. Nice to like all the characters and feel involved with the outcome. Great job.

I loved this story. Amazing attention to detail. Felt like I was right there. Great writing.

I would love to read more of your stories

Absolutely superb - masterful! About to see if you've written any more - hope so!

Well done, great story. I look forward to reading more of your writing.

Really enjoyed your story-- the whole massage deal is of interest to me (check out my new story, "The Massage Gambit" posted last week. I'll be checking out your other stories!

Enjoyed reading this but got thrown with so much tecnhical detail. if it was condensed down a little i'd give it the highest rating possible.