by ironworks
i loved it
you are such a wanton slut for him aren t you
wishing i was neil and taking that slut
keep writing you are good no ....... you are very good
5 * 1000 hardons and a mind blowing orgasm
Poorly written. There's not enough exposition to understand where these characters are nor who they are. This is an interesting concept, but the execution isn't great.
Great potential in this story.
Would love to hear what the business man on the lower level was seeing, thinking, feeling, and doing…his perspective would be fun.
Does Neil make Katy cum at the table? Perhaps as the servers place the food on the table?