All Comments on 'Katy has a New Experience'

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neilnblowme2neilnblowme2almost 2 years ago

i loved it

you are such a wanton slut for him aren t you

wishing i was neil and taking that slut

keep writing you are good no ....... you are very good

5 * 1000 hardons and a mind blowing orgasm

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Poorly written. There's not enough exposition to understand where these characters are nor who they are. This is an interesting concept, but the execution isn't great.

Paul4playPaul4playalmost 2 years ago

Great potential in this story.

Would love to hear what the business man on the lower level was seeing, thinking, feeling, and doing…his perspective would be fun.

Does Neil make Katy cum at the table? Perhaps as the servers place the food on the table?

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