All Comments on 'Katy's Body Pt. 01'

There's promise of more but there's nothing here

Enticing,but too short to score. There's a clarity to the voice, shades of fearlessness, but without action or conflict, I'm not finding the eroticism. I hope that can be remedied once the story gets going.

(Hint: *write from a state of arousal.)

Keep going, please...;)

PS, stunning pics.

Well, way too short chapter with little character development.

Katy's body comprises multiple parts. It was always intended to have a strong foundation in truth and the first few parts are almost wholly truthful. It is simply the truth that Katy's journey into submission was not at first filled with exciting action but understanding her way of thinking should help with the appreciation of later parts.

While the pictures are very nice the story series simply sucks. Need a better writer to go with the pictures. Skill set for writing is substandard at best. Extremely boring and none of the chapters elicit any desire to read forward.

Just finished this series. I found it to be outstanding overall. This Part 1 is probably the least erotic of the series but sets the foundation for the series. The model is beautiful. I highly recommend it.

Considering that I was erect just from the looking at her and reading snippets within two minutes I’d say it appeals to me. That plus the fact that I’m not attracted to tall blonde flat chested women is proof that it’s the disregard I would hold you in as I use you. Very nice start.

I think you are beautifully sexy and extremely desirable.

The wish to be appreciated physically is understandable. As a guy I don’t understand what makes me attractive to women, though I’m told by them that I am, and, whether I am or not, I want to present my body to them for them to enjoy until they’re sated. It’s not that I’m a bad lover, because they say I’m very good, but to me it’s tied to my belief that our bodies should be enjoyed, and enjoyable in a caring way.

Excellent Review 5*

Nice Teaser!

Nice, but this pussy is "major over trimmed" 4 rating instead of 5 for a serious lack of abundant pubic hair.

Love the pics!!! I'm expecting the story line to get more erotic and arousing as I continue reading.

Love, sucks and fucks,

Bob