by Moon_and_Stars
I think in the next chapter Kayla and Mike should continue their journey, maybe some oral sex, she likes the taste of his cum so a blowjob is an obvious choice and then he should fuck her hard, so hard that she will never stray. She will only want her brothers cock going forward. I dont think Kaylas freind should be involved, just brother and sister fucking is what is required here.
I loved this story, but I wanted brother to go knocking on his sister's door. Maybe in a second installment.
good start to what could become a really good tale. curious as to where you take this from here. keep writing. my only suggestion is to proof-read more, maybe get an editor if you plan to write more stories.
Fantastic start! Looking forward to additional chapters! Keeping going and don't let negative comments hold you back especially from anonymous users. I don't think they should be allowed to comment! It no big deal to sign up!!!
Chris