All Comments on 'Kayla and Mike - Taboo Unleashed'

by Moon_and_Stars

Sort by:
  • 21 Comments
Jerryr6Jerryr6over 3 years ago

Very hot! Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Good start!

Keep up the good work. Can hardly wait for part 2 and beyond.

TryingnottoquitTryingnottoquitover 3 years ago

Very good first story. I’m looking forward to the next chapter.

dezzirabledezzirableover 3 years ago
Amazing

Can’t wait for the continuation

RobNallyRobNallyover 3 years ago
I think this is a nice story

I think in the next chapter Kayla and Mike should continue their journey, maybe some oral sex, she likes the taste of his cum so a blowjob is an obvious choice and then he should fuck her hard, so hard that she will never stray. She will only want her brothers cock going forward. I dont think Kaylas freind should be involved, just brother and sister fucking is what is required here.

rudolfinorudolfinoover 3 years ago
Outstanding

I loved this story, but I wanted brother to go knocking on his sister's door. Maybe in a second installment.

path41path41over 3 years ago
Future

I can see a lot of possibilities. Keep up the good work.

AverageBearAverageBearover 3 years ago

Great start - looking forward to more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
I can’t wait for part two!

I can’t wait for part two

muskyboymuskyboyover 3 years ago

Should have written a whole story...not a big fan of teasers

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

good start to what could become a really good tale. curious as to where you take this from here. keep writing. my only suggestion is to proof-read more, maybe get an editor if you plan to write more stories.

WargamerWargamerover 3 years ago

Hot!!!!!!!

Keep it up😂

chrissycamorechrissycamoreover 3 years ago
Agree great start

Fantastic start! Looking forward to additional chapters! Keeping going and don't let negative comments hold you back especially from anonymous users. I don't think they should be allowed to comment! It no big deal to sign up!!!

Chris

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Really come on. I'm hard and they didn't fuck

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Quite bieveable; well done.

KlitomaticKlitomaticover 3 years ago
Good

Start, carry on.

NesticNesticover 3 years ago

Wowww… Great Start... I enjoy your choice of words and storyline ...

LegallySaneLegallySaneabout 3 years ago

Both girls are just cock teases. 1*

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Kayla should have caught her friend blowing Mike

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
userMoon_and_Stars@Moon_and_Stars
6/3/2023 I have submitted the final chapter of Kayla & Mike College Days that should be released in a few days. Thank you to everyone for reading this series and for your support. I do have several stories in the works, including a final story for Kayla and Mike. However, liv...