All Comments on 'Kayla and Renee's First Time'

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XactoXactoabout 1 month ago

That’s lovely. I believe this should continue. Please. ❤️

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Very excellent story!

SirDigbyChickenCaesarSirDigbyChickenCaesar19 days ago

One of the better interweavings of past and present this side of paranormal. (Side-eyes Bill...)

On the one hand, I was a little surprised Kayla's sacking doesn't appear to be connected, on the other it's a refreshing buck of cliché. Life's a game of roulette, and who knows where the ball lands.

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Hello! I've been writing for a while and I'm trying to break into the erotica scene. Always wanted to do it, but haven't really started until now. Feel free to give my works a look-through, let me know what you think!