All Comments on 'Kayla's Unexpectations 01 - Valentine'

The idea of being overpowered by both a partner and one's own base urges is a hot spot for me, and this story captures both rather well. I see it's the author's first upload, and quite honestly I'm a bit jealous of how well it turned out. Hopefully we see a lot more!

it's good enough for me. Plenty good, plenty hot. You go, girl!

Very well written. Predictable, but enjoyable. Just the right length for a coffee break. Keep those stories cumming

Nice, short and sweet.

I have a sequel planned for this story actually....I like the characters so much that I just had to do it. :)

I wish that after she told him she wanted it he made it clear that once she gave herself to him and asked for it that her body now belongs to him when he takes an urge hard to put the monster back in the bottle. If I were him not getting it often then it will be a very long nite for her lol. keep writing I enjoyed it

Loved it! I want to read the sequal

The sequel's been posted, you can find the link in my profile. :)

Hmmm

my god i was about to explode myself , i am so glad he actually did it at the end , fantastic story