All Comments on 'Kaylee's Unexpected Discovery'

On what fucking planet is this erotic you cocksucking weasel? You some kind of rapist that gets off on hurting other people? Why not rip out her teeth on national tv? Amputate her arms and legs? Why not put her inside a metal coffin and heat it up?

Thats what filth like you get off on, right? Hey. Maybe you can get her pregnant and then kick her into having an abortion and then make her eat that as well.

Oh wait, is that past a limit for you? Is that too sadistic or are just a piece of shit that imagines raping a woman but do t have the balls…or maybe you prefer someone younger.

Wouldn't surprise me considering the shit you vomited up and put on here.

Fucking weasel.

I hope you enjoy prison.

I didn't think it needed to be said but everyone in the story is 18+ years old. It was posted to non consent for a reason, it contains mind control and blackmail which was tagged as well. The description also suggests that her sister is going to ruin her life.

And I guess it needs to be said that I would never condone anything that was not fully consensual in real life. This is just an over the top work of fiction that includes magic and completely unrealistic situations so I didn't think it needed to be said but since some people are taking it so seriously I just want to make that clear.

Anonymous is a big baby lmao. I enjoy your stories, I'm glad you're getting around to finishing your other series though. I've been following it for so long.

why would you comment something like that on a non-con story anon? You are in the wrong section my dude

Wow, that was amazing and pretty hilarious at some points. They were so mean to hear. I especially loved her last with Charlotte.

Thanks so much Holy_Law and trewq175 for your comments, I'm glad you enjoyed it! And i'm so happy you picked up on some of the funny ridiculous bits I threw in there. I really didn't want to take this story too seriously so it's awesome that someone picked up on that.

Thanks for the mention.

I really had to laugh at some points. Although I'm a little embarrassed to read my comment. I don't know what I wrote there...

I've liked your other stories, but I like this one the best. How long do you usually write something like this, if you don't mind me asking?

great story, you are awesome!

this is one of my favourite stories, I like the character arc of the mother from someone passive to getting more aggressive near the end.

you are a great writer keep up the good work.

Can not wait for the conclusion on the other story!!!! I've been checking back daily

Thanks for the positive comments twigsandworms. To answer a few other comments, a story like this takes quite a long time, weeks really becuase I can't do it full time and sometimes I don't like the direction and have to change things up, and as for the conclusion of the other story, while I have made a little progress I am far from finished and I'm working much slower since I have less time right now so I don't think it would be ready any time soon.

You're by far my fav author on this site! I just LOVE how cruel people are to her!

It's a very heavy story. Honestly, I didn't really enjoy it. If only the witches would finally get angry with Kaylee and take their powers. Even if they punished she. Frankly, I was a little upset.

Loved it! More like this one!!

I think some readers are too hypocritical, and when they had ejaculated, they started to think of themselves as a moral saint.

Brilliant story! Definitely going to check out your others as well.