All Comments on 'Kayley Earns Her A Pt. 01'

Good premise.

Sex rushed.

Needed to slow down.

Needed dialog about what was happening and how it made each feel.

Since her boyfriend didn't like blow jobs, at least it should have been confirmed that she liked giving them. Or would like to give a blowjob if she'd never done it before.

Some playing with his balls would have been nice.

Showing him how she masturbated would have been a plus.

Three stars.

Great start.

When can we expect next chapter??

Great start, we need more of this.

Contrary to the other comment about being rushed, I felt like there are a real freshness to your writing style. I feel teased and excited for the next installment

Love it, please write about the next six times as well, I'd like more degradation and dirty talk