All Comments on 'Keep This Secret Pt. 03'

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WhackdoodleWhackdoodlealmost 2 years ago

Loveless sex gets old. It becomes a job.

Working out, playing video games, sex, hanging out with friends, watching a movie….these are as important as sex and without them, lets face it, just having sex all the goddamn time would get boring.

Tell us that was totally unaroused and I would believe it. Telling me that they had non stop sex for 3 days and I’ll call you a liar.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Like your story, ty!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This series has the potential to be really impressive. You're bringing feelings in, some complexity, a real human element.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Unique and well written

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