All Comments on 'Keep This Secret Pt. 04'

Well that sucked… is he going to pimp her out next? MC is a piece of white human being…

Each person has their own fetish, but turning your girlfriend into a stripper just doesn't appeal to me. But, to each their own.

Wouldn't have picked Van Halen's 'Jump' as a starter song for a strip tease dance. Maybe 'Let's Dance' by David Bowie or go with the ultimate Youtube meme with 'Never Gonna Give You Up' by Rick Astley.

I have enjoyed this story to this point. 5/5 has been my score thus far.

But l do not like the direction this chapter took. No matter how you paint this up, the main character is now exploiting her as a sex worker for his own prurient desires. Lap dancing indeed, he is disgusting.

What next?

He has her prostitute herself???

This chapter scores 2/5

I hope we recover soon to more balance in the story.