All Comments on 'Keep Your Enemies Closer'

Great story nicely told with good flow and some interesting characters, definitely needs more chapters to explore this story.

Great idea a well written but rather rushed. I prefer a more involved story around the sex. Keep going.

Well done!

Went too quickly from enemies making peace to having sex, especially for Orthodox women. There needs to be hesitation, fear of rejection, initial pushing away because they know its wrong etc until temptation and desire overwhelm all morals.