All Comments on 'Keeping It Close'

by HJO66

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tallman441tallman4415 months ago

Well written and a good start. You cut it way to short. Definitely continue. You leave the reader hanging and wanting more.

LL180LL1805 months ago

Congrtas nice start please continue with the story it has great potential.5 stars....

laughdruidlaughdruid5 months ago

Seems like a very nice story but another page or two would have got more attention. Yes please continue.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Wow wow b to ruin it you were doing so well then you ended it too quick

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Very good, please continued it!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Very good, please continued it!

Ozgood13Ozgood135 months ago

Please add to this.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Please continue your story. It started to arouse me, then it finished abruptly.

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Update- I have just recently re-edited all of my material as of mid-December 2023, and it should all be surfaced by the new year.