All Comments on 'Keeping the Secret Ch. 02'

I somehow missed Part 1 and read them both tonight. I like how you develop the characters and use a great idea to get them together. I'm sure you'll get flamed for writing this story which is something I don't understand. Anyway....keep writing!

I hope the husband gets a kick out of seeing his wife blacked. On the other hand I would want the husband to come home and see what is going on and simply walk away. No questions asked. The wife then gets divorced and ends up the real blacked slut that she wants to be. And you have the codes wrong. There is nothing romantic about this set up.

Keep writing.

notice your husband taking any cock up his ass or in his mouth. Maybe he is a cuck and you are a tramp. You write hott stuff. I am going to read part 3 and looking forward to it.

but not bad at all.