All Comments on 'Keeping up with the Neighbors Ch. 04'

It was an erotic ending with Billy making love to Marcy the way he does his wife Nancy. Nice of Nancy to be as open to sharing her husband as she did.

Food for thought IF there was a 5th. installment.

In the week(s) that followed this life changing experience between Marcy and Billy. Nancy sensing Marcy being alone every night and living all alone now. Nancy gets an idea and suggests to Billy that they upgrade their bed to a King Sized bed and invite Marcy to come live with them on a trial basis. And if Marcy feels comfortable living with them they could stay together on a long term.

I agree, yet with one more connection to close the triangle... the girls also go beyond mere friendship too, no rejection within polyfidelity, committment for the romantic happy ending. Each gets half of two people's hearts equaling unity, and even doubled by vicarious enjoyment of their requitement with each other. Everybody wins.

I like the story and the great description of the creampie ending.

Eating creampies has been a highly enjoyable part of my sexual experience for decades. Most of my partners through the years have loved it, and as you say in some/most of your stories here, the initial reluctance to dive in quickly fades once you do it, and the whole sloppy, tangy, fragrant mess becomes a huge turn-on. I even love nibbling and licking up any residual crusty stuff in her curly hair the morning after.... ;-)

Looking forward to more!

You're doing well with this. It is not as rare a practice as the characters believe.

I'd suggest you delete the anonymous comments, even if they're good. I hate it when people refuse to identify themselves.

I can't get away with you calling Nancy Nanc surely it would be better to call her Nance? I know that's what you mean but it comes across as Nank.

Finally, just desserts for Marcy and Jeff is out in the cold! Don't think the next chapter should include Marcy moving in. My suggestion would be that Marcy finds a new boyfriend and asks Jeff and Nancy to demonstrate and train her new boyfriend in cream pie eating.