All Comments on 'Kelly Ch. 01'

cute but i can't wait for chapter two.

Liked the story and the character development.

Look forward to reading the rest

lol I hate being left on cliff-hangers. More please!

Excellent!!, hope pt II is coming real soon....it sucks to be left hanging on such a good note!! More chapters, real soon, like yesterday, thank you very much!!!!!

I don't usually ask someone to do another chapter, but put a wiggle in it, Okay.

i think this story is so sweet. You're mixing up eroticism and trans acceptance. Excellent.

A beautiful warm story so far.

How do you keep it so inviting, pleasurable as the guys progress?

We look forward to your telling.

Promises to be a great series. Keep it coming.

Very good but not nice to be left hanging , hope pt 2 is coming real soon

Can relate to it totally as a "Kelly" myself. Lovely

Cherie

I like both the characters and my only problem is it ends before the fun stuff. You got a great starting point, so please continue to write.

very nice when is the second part coming out?

Uv got me rock har d