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We fuck all night long. So passionately. So heated. So freaky. And so loving as well. Our love for one another burning so bright and so hot between us. I love my wife. I love her more than anything. And every day, I realize that again. Love ya, sweetheart.
By: DickThePimp
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LenardSpencer10 months agoDick, you really have to understand the Point Of View from where you are writing. In most of the "action" you write from the POV of the husband. WHO IS NOT THERE, SO CAN"T POSSIBLY DESCRIBE WHAT IS HAPPENING.
The husband cannot operate as an invisible eye-in-the-sky, seeing everything and also being able to read the thoughts of each of the wife and Ed. You can only write from the view point of either Ed or of Kelly, if the action only involves those two. That's why the story doesn't make any sense.
