All Comments on 'Kelly's Story Pt. 01'

If I could have given zero stars I would have. In the 25 plus years I have been reading stories here at Literotica, this is definitely without doubt...the biggest waste of space and time. Seriously...48F!!!

I have never understood why anyone believes that stories with 10" dicks and 48" breasts make a story worth reading or even seem hopelessly realistic. Only one word describes this thought process..... PATHETIC

Crap is the only word that describes this feeble attempt at a story

Really looking forward to seeing this unfold. Great so far

Sorry. Couldn't get past the 48 inch chest on a 130 pound five foot woman. If you're gonna tell a story make it feasible, or list it in sci-fi 1*

Will there be more? Very arousing and intriguing.

Voted three stars (= dislike) because I do not like short and seemingly incomplete stories. I am not sure what intentions the author has for this story. And frankly, I do not care, as there is not an indication of additional chapters or segments. Nice try!

So many mixed reactions in the comments. Me, I thought this represented a good effort. Undoubtedly there are a lot of women that fantasize about properly bringing their son(s) into manhood. And I am sure there are many that do.

The time lines were reasonable; party over, clean-up completed, a little liquid courage . . .

The short lady with the massive breasts is/was questionable for me too. Maybe they are something the author would like to have ?

I believe there is a good deal of potential shown for this author. With more stories we will find out for sure.

Please keep writing and, by the way, I liked the length, I don't read much past 3.5k

You really need character development..... and seduction. I can only guess that you are of a young age. As such.... have no emotional bonds that tie couples together.... Heyall ias a writer I have followed.... Take a moment, and THINK about the story you are trying to convey< No hate here,,,, 1 star

i think the commentators are being overly harsh. i read it and liked it. i think some constructive suggestions are to build up a bit more, and sure tone down the breast size. but i found myself wanting to read a part 2 and that means it did something good! we should encourage authors, and i want to encourage this author to keep writing more! i did like the mother's internal struggle and i would encourage more elaboration of that. but please keep writing!

I agree with some of the comments up to now. Overall I like the introduction. Take a look and the comments and decide what ones you want to implement and those that you will ignore. Most importantly don’t change the concept you have for the story. Write well and make it interesting and we’ll like it. Most of us anyway. 5s