All Comments on 'Kelsey Pays For Her Crimes Ch. 01'

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califdaphnecalifdaphneover 4 years ago

More please. This is written very good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
talkative

it is good but largely too much talkative

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
A welcome return!

Good to see you back! Looking forward to the other stories thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Can you do some tit punching punishment? Specifically using her breast as punching bags and maybe the get a boxer administrating it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Will Await Next Week's JD!

Missed your great stories. What's next in store for Kelsey?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Glad to See You Back

Great stories. Can’t wait to see what’s next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Amazing

This is such a wonderful story. One of if not my favorite!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great Story

Looking forward to her next punishment session. Would also like to see the list of punishments added to the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Love it! Have read it three times now. Please hurry up with the dilations! :)

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Dilations

For one writers take on dilation, check out Room B13

GynoNagusGynoNagusover 3 years ago

I love this story!

Jsmoore311Jsmoore311over 2 years ago

Very good story, but could’ve been about half as long. I scrolled and skipped through tons of it. I mean no disrespect or meanness. I read erotic lit for the erotic aspects, but this had so much unnecessary parts. Great writer, just too long.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Nano machines, son! They harden in response to physical trauma.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

As someone experienced with political torture I would like to point out that the reality is that at least half of the victims will shit and/or piss themselves at some point.

Torture is a very messy business, even when enemas ate used.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

will AJ get her own Series

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