All Comments on 'Kevin and Dawn Pt. 01'

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Anonymousalmost 4 years ago

Great start

5 stars.

AJeye almost 4 years ago

Skipped a lot

I would have enjoyed a description of first intercourse, anal play etc. Your writing is great so I really missed not having those "firsts".

goducks111 almost 4 years ago

a little short....

but 5 stars. Wish this was more "Penny and Ryan" but this was a great sexy start. i'm sure there's a lot more to come

CheerfulVoid over 3 years ago

More of this!

I have to agree, their first encounter was so hot ( I especially love the dirty talk), but I feel like there is a chapter or two missing. Perhaps you could revisit this?

HardBen over 3 years ago

Great erotic story

Super descriptive and "nasty" delicious sex.

Great start to the series.

Experienced70 almost 3 years ago

Really HOT!

ScottishTexan almost 3 years ago

I prefer love stories over raw sex. Sex without love serves little purpose and is very unfulfilling.

At this point, curiosity is the only motivation that I have to keep reading. 3/5

ghalbertmck almost 2 years ago

pretty good, and looking forward to the sequels.

zoolicious almost 2 years ago

Really hot and well-written. Looking forward to reading more of your stories.

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I've written several published novels, but I enjoy getting "down and dirty" once in a while here, and going deep into the taboo areas that a lot of mainstream readers might not appreciate (or who secretly would, but would never admit to it in public!) Several of my stories hav...

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