All Comments on 'Keys To The Mind Ch. 01'

by JessiGirlHypno

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Nice start!

I'm looking forward to the next chapter. The victim who knows something is wrong but can't quite place it is one of my favorites.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Good story so far.

Unless you turn the subject into a total nympho like so many other stories here. I wouldn't want a woman who couldn't say no to me because that would get boring really fucking fast!

xPrimalDesirexxPrimalDesirexover 10 years ago

I like it so far. I mean...in certain categories you're going to see variations of the same thing. So rather or not she DOES turn into a sex addict or whatever...I can't wait for the next part. I've found repeating plots and things never get old on this site, haha.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Good start

It is well written and easy to follow. You have planted the hock, when do we get the next chapter?

C_frommnC_frommnover 10 years ago
Great Start

Like the way its headed hope you continue with this and Not make it a 1 Chapter Wonder.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
will we ever see a part 2?

???

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