Kidnapped

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Cagivagurl
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Driving down to the farm felt sad, but for some reason I couldn't wipe the smile off my face. Daisy's smile kept appearing, her cute sneaky tease of a smile. Her glistening luminous eyes. How could I not be happy.

Behind me were failed romances and a destroyed marriage. Ravages of toxic emotions. In front of me was light, a brilliant welcoming lightness, and I knew from deep within it was exactly what I wanted.

My partner for life, my love...

The end

Woman: Sasha Knap

Husband: Grant Knap.

Female kidnapper: Daisy.

Her brother: Jeremy.

Mother in law: Esme.

Father in law: Howard Knap.

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nogravynogravy1 day ago

Extraordinarily original and well-thought-out tale. It held my attention throughout, and I enjoyed it immensely. The only nitpicking that I have is with the rather abrupt ending, but it's not uncommon for an author to simply run out of steam on a story. Notwithstanding that comment, I still give it five stars.

KenfromIndyKenfromIndyabout 2 months ago

Very interesting and well done storytelling and writing. Good well rounded characters and dialogue written. The story just hit a good nerve and was a pleasurable reading experience. Definitely 5 stars and would be higher if I could. I can only give it this additional positive comment. Well worth the read and definitely would be worth reading again when new stories are slow. So I will place this in my favorites as well.

Please do keep writing and I will keep reading.

rnebularrnebularabout 2 months ago

This story was great and I enjoyed reading it, even though it was long. Fyi, several US states now allow legal same sex marriage, not sure if New York is one of them but they wouldn't need to leave the country now to get married.

To nitpick, I cringe every single time I see the word "brought" instead of "bought". One little letter but it makes a huge difference. I'm not sure if it's a dialect thing for you, or an honest mistake but it is very annoying. When someone buys something, past tense of it isn't brought, which indicates bringing the thing not buying it.

Aside from that and periods replacing commas throughout, the story itself was a great read.

Thanks for sharing. 5*

Anita71Anita71about 2 months ago

Superb as always.Well written, great story

JamesBBKJamesBBKabout 2 months ago

Forgive me, Fuck I love this story! Well written, great story, enticing characters and a fun read. Yep, even at 3:30 am. I do like more detailed sex scenes but yours seem real, passionate and fulfilling. It is a bit of an odd twist. However, life offers us opportunities to grow and become so much more. Unfortunately, we often do not listen or hear. Thank goodness Sasha did!!

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