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Your story shows promise, it also shows how Google has really reached the point where it is easy to understand your meaning, but there is still a long way to go before it gets to the point where it makes for good reading. Unfortunately, the only way is a good editor, and I think to edit your translated English into fluid English would take around 4 hours of work. Due to other projects, I don’t have this time at present, but please check the editor section and try to find someone who fits your needs. It is one of the sad facts of the world that your readership would go up ten-fold if your stories were in fluid English, but if writing is your target then go for it and persevere. Best of luck to you.