by Ebolaone
The story you're creating is exciting to read & pushing my buttons. As I commented on Part 1 of this story, it isn't too long or short. Alecia telling us her stats in Part 2 was nice, it helped further the mental pic I have of her.
I think you should change the No Anal this time for the Whiners tag to just No Anal, as your story is the only one with this tag. It'll help those who want to read stories without Anal in them. Myself, I like the stories you've written with the anal play in them. You might also add the tag Voyeur to all chapters.
Part 4 sounds promising with the addition of more characters. Looking foreword to reading it soon. Maybe their just voyeurs & want a live show or perhaps 1 or both want to explore? I don't know, waiting for chapter 4...