All Comments on 'Kilohana Lookout'

Thanks for writing about my home island. Still live here on Kauai, had an experience like your story with my BF. But got caught, LOL. Expressions were priceless. Keep up the good work, look foward for your next piece

You really took us there; I love the mix of isolatioed serenity and daredevil excitement. Very cool.

i just confessed my feelings to this hawaiian guy..2 days ago and reading the story reminded me of him...its good, gr8 job keep it on

I felt like I was there watching...:D Thanks Ken.

You make it feel very real, as though the story unfolded in front of my eyes..thanks Ken

Ken, you know how to create a story that takes anyones breath away and then some. I dont like first person stories but I like yours. Keep doing what you know best and Ill keep on reading them over and over again. Arigatoo gozaimasu

really great story - a fantastic mix of scenery and excitement with a daredevil streak. Sounds like an encounter my best friend had... but they got caught. Apparently the extressions were completely and utterly priceless!

I have to agree with 3113 on this, your location descriptions are incredible. I feel like I could be there, an invisable third party watching the action. Please keep writing.

Great story. Good build-up and hot sex. Just the way I like to read it. Hope you get back to posting more.