All Comments on 'Kim'

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amygdalaamygdalaalmost 3 years ago

I liked it..2 everyday people going through the ups and downs of life that found each other. That ending after they go together though could have been fleshed out some more with more first person narratives and exploration of interpersonal emotions and feelings.

chytownchytownalmost 3 years ago

****Good read very entertaining without going overboard. Thanks for sharing.

SouthernCrossfireSouthernCrossfirealmost 3 years ago

Very good story. It went a little fast in the wrap up, but I loved the ending.

lawyerwifelawyerwifealmost 3 years ago

I love this! I love the way he fucks her like a needy slut and then loves her like a lady. that's a true man <3

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