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by Samuelx

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You don’t have to continually use someone’s last name in a story. It throws off the flow and then they lose interest. Continually repeating Ashlyn Blaze in my head distracted me from the story to the point where I quit reading.

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I am Samuelx. I am Black. I am Male. I was born in Cap-Haitien, Northern Haiti, and raised in Brockton, Massachusetts. I now live in Canada. I am the one and only Haitian Trickster, and quite simply live only by my own rules. I...