All Comments on 'King of the Jungle Ch. 01'

by warrior_wolf

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dugaaurudugaaurualmost 12 years ago
haha i like it

i love how, after i read the instant attraction and trust thing that gets drilled into my head with almost every shifter story you go"max was hallucinatin, but luckily alec hsd good intentions". first, its more original. second, the instant trust thing gets a bit annoying and unbelievable after a while. third, it made me laugh.

lil_honlil_honalmost 18 years ago
Great

Amazing, I can't wait for you to finish.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
This is so promising!

Don't stop writing because you think you got writersblock. It didn't show at all that you needed inspiration or help anywhere. Keep in mind that: the jungleman, can ... ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
loved your story

Yes Yes Yes continue this story ..... great so far

Mistress_JoliMistress_Jolialmost 18 years ago
Excellent

I agree with everyone else. You should finish this story. It is wonderful

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Can't wait to see the next one!

I think this has a lot of promise, and I hope it doesn't fall to the muses... keep up with Chapter Two!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Eager for more

I really hope you continue this story!

pet_tigresspet_tigressalmost 18 years ago
hhhoowwwwllll!!

woohooo!!! I love your story! The plot is creative, the details are vivid, and the characters are multi-dimensional already! This is definitely going to be a keeper if the other chapters are even half as good as this! Keep up the great work!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
I likes

I'll definatley be looking for more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
loved it!!!!

i absolutely loved this story i cant wait till the next chapter is up

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