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JustplainjeffJustplainjeffover 2 years ago

Holy shit, Samantha, you've written some really bad stories, before, but this just might be your worst. Past tense, to present tense, and back and forth, so often it made me dizzy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I was hoping your New Year's resolution was to stop writing. As always you leave us disappointed. None of us commenting care about anything about you except your pitifully bad writing. Get another hobby or at the very least take a formal writing class, bring along some of your posted work for a professional critique.

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I am Samuelx. I am Black. I am Male. I was born in Cap-Haitien, Northern Haiti, and raised in Brockton, Massachusetts. I now live in Canada. I am the one and only Haitian Trickster, and quite simply live only by my own rules. I...