by Abyss_Slut
Good premise.
But sex is too automatic. Too matter-of-fact. Needs more teasing and foreplay before getting to fucking. She needed to have been edged close to cumming a number of times before being allowed to cum. She needed to be 'forced' to excite him. With her hands behind he back, if her back were against his chest, she could have teased his cock while he was reaching around to play with her breasts and pussy.
Three stars.