by OpenedPlay
Oh wow! I love what you did with this cliched setup. All the stars. Will definitely read again!!
This is incredibly hot, well done!
First part was fine, but you jumped the shark with part 2. Too bad.
Love it keep it go I ng
Agree you ruined this. The whole "lol and now everyone in the family fucks" thing is SO FUCKING BORING and TRITE and STUPID.
I love this so much- I hope there's another chapter coming!