All Comments on 'Kirstie's Family Surprise'

Fantastic first story.

You have a very good writing skill.

Much more will always be appreciated.

Exciting family. The only thing missing is Rachel has to see first hand her boyfriend Mikey have intercourse with his mother Chrissie and then his sister Kirstie. Would love to see the next chapter.

The story was interesting, but I'm a little confused by Mikey. He seems more like a plot device to get Rachel there rather than a part of the family. Makes it feel like the whole family is cuckolding him rather than a family that just likes to fuck each other.

kingswede either doesn't know how to spell "ninth", cannot count, or is clueless about the definition of first.

Whatever. I couldn't get past the boring as hell listing out of characters. I know that anyone who needs to start something that way has zero creativity, so I saved myself a few minutes and skipped the rest.