All Comments on 'Kismet Ch. 04'

by TE999

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ausvirgoausvirgoover 7 years ago
An interesting development.

I liked the gentler tone of this chapter.

Some feedback: several times you misspelled Afsoon's and Farisa's names, which I found distracting.

RedHairedandFriendlyRedHairedandFriendlyover 12 years ago
I'm blown away

- that I never posted a comment! I distinctly remember this arousing tale and appreciated the friendship you formed for Afsoon. My apologies again for not recalling this chapter until now! *slaps hands* I am so glad we're moving this story back into the forefront. ~ Red

TricialenTricialenover 15 years ago
So Much More than Nice....

Ummm....very erotic...very sensual....

voluptuary_manquevoluptuary_manquealmost 16 years ago
Oh, nice!

This is developing splendidly. Well written, that man.

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