All Comments on 'Kissing Contest'

An incredibly steamy tale written incredibly well

This was the hottest story I have read.I was playing with my cock and cummed in no time.I read it another time later and cummed again.This is now my favorite story.

incredibley hot and very well written. Would have enjoyed a little more about the guy and gals on the front end. Was anyone 'cheating'?

Very well written and witty! I think once you got into the bedroom, some of the attention to details and imagery that you had at the beginning of the story weren't there. Also, i'd have liked more detail on what the girls looked like, especially once they were naked. But a terrific and refreshing story nonetheless. Great Job!

Loved it. HOT!

Fulfilled several man type fantasies.

Keep it up.

A very good story line, well developed and well written.

Begs for more from this author.

Hot tub, hot story, enjoyed it. Nice one. Don't normally give 5 stars for one page stories, but believable, good dialogue and a proper ending.

If someone ever was curious to read a good stroke story, I would show them this one. It was perfect.