by MissDarkKitten
Your writing style is loose, comfortable, and beautifully executed. I don't think you need to do anything special to "spice" this up -- just let your imagination play. Very much looking forward to how this series continues.
I liked this a lot. It was a very quick read but made me want to hear more about this story. Very much looking forward to further installments!
Loved both this and the first offering. I like the breezy style. Very well done.
I almost feel that I’m there with you because of your wonderful writing. Please keep writing!
For sure, you've masturbated watching similar porn. Your orgasms are measured on the Richter Scale.
A great continuation from the first part. Very quickly arousing.
She had remained silent.
She had obeyed when directed.
She had been willing.
She had trusted him.
She needed to be his.
Excellent. You nailed the basis of the D/s relationship and interactions.
Well done, Kitten. Well done.