All Comments on 'Kitty in Peril Ch. 02'

Powerful

There is supposed to be more of it - I wonder where it went? This is the second time I've submitted this - rejected first time. Most odd.

Awesome start! More please!

When a person first wakes and realizes they are bound and gagged...they do NOT know the color nor the type of material of their gag. White and cotton is not even something you can taste.

She was not looking in a mirror.

Dear Anonymous

It's written in the third person.

The detail is for the reader, from their point of view.

What don't you get about that?

Very erotic, would love to read more....

Why leave your victim in such a bad way? At least finish the story.