All Comments on 'Kneeling'

Simply beautiful.

You truly have a wonderful gift to write like this. It speaks to all of my senses and I would dearly love to be Elizabeth. I'll be waiting for more.

I ABSOLUTLY LOVED this story! It was wonderful, so beautiful, I can only dream of being this luck to have such a caring and loving Master. Thank you for sharing your storie. I am goign to look in your profile to see if you have more. I sure hope you do! Please keep writing!

Very well done! You maintained the proper amount of tension, keeping me on the edge of my seat until the very end. Fabulous descriptions. But is William man enough to switch roles with Elizabeth?