All Comments on 'Knight Time Ch. 01'

Very erotic! You made this a Chapter 1, so I assume that there will be continuations to follow. And you mentioned that you had shot in her fertile cunt, so that tells me that maybe she is using you for stud services, coupled with a little lust. Are you going to knock up your step-mother, too? There are several avenues of continuation that could be used here. You are writing very well....

Very cool story

Keep up the good work

And do continue this :D

Pretty good story. Sexy & interesting. Too bad the husband didn't come home in time..., it could have been even a more interesting sexy story. I would have added the husband catching them, then chasing the young guy off. The husband & wife fighting via screaming at each other, which would bring on more sexual tension which would then lead to even more erotic sex. Sound interesting? Hmmm?