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by kngelol

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fanficwriter1fanficwriter1over 3 years ago
Good sex, but you might want an editor.

You might want to run your story by an editor to fine tune it in the future. It's also a bit weird having Syrana say that the beast is her husband and they are married. Mate would be a more accurate term.

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Hobby grade fantasy erotica writer that likes fantasy plot with sex or fantasy sex with a plot. I mostly write for my own fun and to get the ideas cluttering my mind haunt someone else for a change. The English language is...