by DrawLine
Interesting twist at the end, with her trying to get control by saying she wanted it. I'm curious to see what he will do next, and ultimately how everything will turn out. Please continue.
i would love to read more...this is a awesome fantasy..control but with the desire to give pleasure..i love that
Truly a delusional character though he seemed morally questionable with his rant about his ex and her obvious condition. Really nice build up, but for some stupid reason I allowed his inner dialogue to give me hope that he wouldn't rape her, silly me. I'd like to see what you do with the story next.
I love stories where friends get past the "friend zone". Just don't turn him into too much of an asshole, or her into too much of a stereotype, and you'll have something really worthwhile.
Trust me on this when a female says no especially when shes been forced into this position she means NO and no matter how many times you force her and try to change her mind even if she changes her mind its still rape
Colleges now promote "YES means YES". Waiting to hear a woman ask or agree to sex gives the woman control. "No means no" is dependent on the male.
Given that Taz asked "please, fuck me", it is NOT rape. That aside, this IS fantasy and IS a nonconsent story. I'm a woman and am loving this story so far.
A story about rape? Here, in the non-consent section? I'm appalled...