by Padre33
I can’t wait to see where you take these characters. I’m loving this story so far.
I like the romance of the Mom and son. I love the line " I already love you. I want someone that respects me and I can talk to". That made me feel that I wanted that as well. Keep up the story. I look forward to reading more of it.
Martin shouldn't have gotten hurt; he had a shotgun that should have been used sooner. It wasted the perfect opportunity for some serious mother fucking in the remote cabin. 4 stars
Yes, definitely more please.
I'm speculating here but with his mother unprotected, and I will admit to a definitive ticklish feeling his father is also partying with other women, I can see their relationship evolving.
Still, I loved the story.