All Comments on 'Korrupting Kayla Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Wow I like!

MiniwandMiniwandover 5 years ago
Finally a new story

Welcome back.

I like your story a lot. It's hot but Marie's behavior is weird so I hope you'll write her back storie at some point to understand how she became professor Miles' slut.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
is the author 8?

Or the character? The constant sniffling and tears and infantile and naive responses are gross and make the girl sounds prepubescent. Get an editor.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great start

Bad ending. Here's to part 2!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Confused?

The sex scenes were great. But the abuse at home made me want to find Kayla's mother and hit her and her weirdo bf with a bus

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

NEW

HAMLIN

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great

Awesome story really intriguing, only one question, whens the next chapter cuming. Please be real soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

Very Nyce

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Wow

Man, this is a masterpiece! Every time I read it I’m rock hard! Keep up the good work!👍

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Angry

Some parts were pretty hot, but I was mostly pissed off and thinking about punching that perverted manipulative bastard of a professor in the face and threatening to kill him if he didn’t leave Kayla alone. The only reason I finished was to see him get what’s coming to him, I hope either from her father or Cole

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Fantastic

Loving your stories, something about them just works so well. Hoping to see more from you soon!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Wow!

I loved this story. Looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Loved the part where you had your fans waiting 8 months for a second chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
to Anonymous : 8 month ?

There is another one who posts a chapter every 2 years.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Alright

Incredible story, need more like right now

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

great use of innocence, reluctance and desire. a heady mix.

HamlinHamlinabout 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you for the comments.

HentaiLoverHentaiLoverabout 1 year ago

great story just the setup with miles goes to fast

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Fabulous introduction, reluctance, desire, and innocence moving steadily to the next stage.

Horny_SchoolgirlF19Horny_SchoolgirlF1910 months ago

Oh God! If only my mom would discipline me like she does for Kayla. Tiffany is so intimidating. I also think something is up with Kayla's Mom and her Brother. Excited for the next part.!! SY!!

PiusPaulPiusPaul9 months ago

Yeah! A fantastic story! I love the theme of corrupting, the good girl going bad thing. I really hope she is going to get extremely bad … :)

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

It was very frustrating! To think, a adult woman allowing herself to be used and abused by her slut mother, and a randy stranger, in front of her brother, is just beyond the pale!? She should have put her foot down, punched her slut mother in the tits, and kicked the arsehole prof., in the goolies! Then, stormed out, never to return! Having said that, it was one of the best written stories, for spelling and grammar! So this is a story that has the potential to run and run! So please keep it coming and coming and adinfinitem.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I loved this series. It’s so hot. I wish it was longer.

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