by Hamlin
Welcome back.
I like your story a lot. It's hot but Marie's behavior is weird so I hope you'll write her back storie at some point to understand how she became professor Miles' slut.
Or the character? The constant sniffling and tears and infantile and naive responses are gross and make the girl sounds prepubescent. Get an editor.
The sex scenes were great. But the abuse at home made me want to find Kayla's mother and hit her and her weirdo bf with a bus
Awesome story really intriguing, only one question, whens the next chapter cuming. Please be real soon.
Man, this is a masterpiece! Every time I read it I’m rock hard! Keep up the good work!👍
Some parts were pretty hot, but I was mostly pissed off and thinking about punching that perverted manipulative bastard of a professor in the face and threatening to kill him if he didn’t leave Kayla alone. The only reason I finished was to see him get what’s coming to him, I hope either from her father or Cole
Loving your stories, something about them just works so well. Hoping to see more from you soon!
Loved the part where you had your fans waiting 8 months for a second chapter.
There is another one who posts a chapter every 2 years.
Fabulous introduction, reluctance, desire, and innocence moving steadily to the next stage.
Oh God! If only my mom would discipline me like she does for Kayla. Tiffany is so intimidating. I also think something is up with Kayla's Mom and her Brother. Excited for the next part.!! SY!!
Yeah! A fantastic story! I love the theme of corrupting, the good girl going bad thing. I really hope she is going to get extremely bad … :)
It was very frustrating! To think, a adult woman allowing herself to be used and abused by her slut mother, and a randy stranger, in front of her brother, is just beyond the pale!? She should have put her foot down, punched her slut mother in the tits, and kicked the arsehole prof., in the goolies! Then, stormed out, never to return! Having said that, it was one of the best written stories, for spelling and grammar! So this is a story that has the potential to run and run! So please keep it coming and coming and adinfinitem.