All Comments on 'Kyle and Kim Have a Night Out'

by MaxWR

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

What about her purse?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I hope you write part 2 to this story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Beautiful

scholarguyscholarguyover 2 years ago

rushed read..titillating experience

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

While rape victims sometimes orgasm, it's hard to imagine this victim cumming under these circumstances. Not a very believable story as written, although the idea has merit. If I was this writer's editor, I'd make him re-write the entire piece. There's an erotic tale to be told here, it just needs a lot of work to get where the writer's trying to go.

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